Thursday, April 06, 2006

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Senate Vote on Immigration Close, Frist Says
Senators warned that if the negotiations collapsed, Congress might fail to take action this year on an issue that has riveted the nation and pushed tens of thousands of immigrants and their supporters into the streets for rallies across the country.

Senators warned that if the negotiations collapsed, Congress might fail to take action this year on an issue that has riveted the nation media and pushed tens hundreds of thousands of immigrants and their supporters into the streets for rallies across the country.

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